| 6 Mar 2009 |  Marika Viklund |  Loading... | |
| 23 May 2009 |  Monserrat "DarkForever" Gutierrez | Loading... Hello, I invite you to read my stories.  John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "thanks for stopping by. I will try to do just that soon. Did you read anything you liked here?" | |
| 24 May 2009 |  Sarah ´Ash´ Koch | Loading... oooh i see you have more stuff up...oh and mods choices now....congrats....i must come back and read  John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "Hi Sarah, Long time no speak.
Thanks - though I think technically, on "Curse of the Black Cobra" is a mods choice. I think "Promise" should be, and like the little stra in the corner, but it does not say on the upload details that it is a mods choice.
I urge reading in the near future, some of the stuff is undergoing a rewrite and once done, it will come down from here so I can submit it elsewhere. " | |
| 30 May 2009 | Monserrat "DarkForever" Gutierrez | Loading... Thanks for tagging my story Legend of the Volcanoes, see ya soon! John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "you are most welcome. I will look at more of your stuff in due course" | |
| 1 Jun 2009 |  Kristynn Amara Halterman | Loading... Hello. Thank you for posting on my lonely profile John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "your welcome. Stumbled upon it when I was reading someone’s stories-I tend to follow folks comments and see where they take me. I like a good story, and artwork can inspire me frequently.
Feel free to stop by and read my work, or not as you like" | |
| 23 Jun 2009 |  Anon. | Loading... Just some advice for your stories.I dont like how you always begin youre sentences with words like "The " "it "i" or "my." Have you ever heard pf a CARP PIE? funny name I know but it stands for writing techniques that really improve your’e writing. Like how you structure sentences-like starting a sentence with an "ing" word and using more varied punctuation like semi colons,commas and hyphens.Give it a try then i garuntee youre story will be much better John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "Thanks for your feedback. I’d like the opportunity to return the favour, if you have a profile here. I have not heard of the technique, though I started looking it up at your suggestion. Care to elaborate?" | |
| 4 Jul 2009 |  Jill O Connell | Loading... wow you have done so much more then me ):
well you are 9 years older then me...
i want to write short stories and possably a novel 2.
can you read my stuff and tell me what you think?
sorry for bothering you..
i will get around to reading your stuff too just not right now (sorry)
 John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "Hi Jill
thanks for stopping by.
Yes, I will have a look at your stuff if you like.
Enjoy your time here.
Welcome to elfwood" | |
| 17 Aug 2009 |  Linda Trude Jansson | Loading... hello^^ how are you? John The Wolfguard sharp replies: "Hi Linda, been a while. Been good thanks. Very busy at work. How have you been?" | |
